ext_58239 ([identity profile] elfscribe5.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] silwritersguild 2015-02-16 07:07 pm (UTC)

Came here based on Oshun's rec. Glad I did, although yes this is a desperately sad story. Perfect title. In a short space you've beautifully summed up the brutality of war - where an unthinking brute can destroy another being of light who had a whole story of his own of loss and regret. I wasn't familiar with the name Aikanáro, so I looked it up -- ah yes! That adds even more layers to the story.

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