I must say that I admire your stamina in this. I haven't worked on the novella-monster in days, although partly because I'm trying to clear my obligations before NaNo :-/
Celegorm's messy room just seems to fit his character. And I love the detail about how Curufin watches his stray hairs to keep from crying. It's very realistic :)
The scene between him and Aredhel is very sad. Foolish girl...giving up a Feanorian! And a hott Feanorian that looks like Feanor! And the scene with him and Poldanis is very tender. Now I am so curious...is she to be his wife?
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Date: 2005-10-28 05:27 pm (UTC)I must say that I admire your stamina in this. I haven't worked on the novella-monster in days, although partly because I'm trying to clear my obligations before NaNo :-/
Celegorm's messy room just seems to fit his character. And I love the detail about how Curufin watches his stray hairs to keep from crying. It's very realistic :)
The scene between him and Aredhel is very sad. Foolish girl...giving up a Feanorian! And a hott Feanorian that looks like Feanor! And the scene with him and Poldanis is very tender. Now I am so curious...is she to be his wife?