SEX DRABBLE
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silwritersguildYesterday, Marta Layton came up with an idea for a drabble with a sexual theme. Okay, I know everybody out there is working on theirs, and that's why it's so quiet this morning! Anyway, I have NEVER written a drabble before, but I jumped on this one like Feanor on Nerdanel before Maitimo was born, and okay, I know it's lame, but, hey! It's my very first one!!
So here it is. I'm cross-posting it to SWG so you can delete it if you want from there. It's called:
GOING THROUGH THE MOTIONS
Her flame-red hair matched the fire in her belly. She entreated her husband to leave his work, and reluctantly he did, and came to her.
“I need you tonight”, she whispered, and began to undo his trousers. He wriggled out of the skin-tight pants by himself, and moved against her.
Staring into his eyes, she opened her dress, as red as her hair, and exposed her bosom. Then she picked up his hand, placing it between the pale mounds.
Hungrily, she sought his lips, but no return of passion was received.
“Alas, Feanor”, she sighed, “you no longer want me.”
So here it is. I'm cross-posting it to SWG so you can delete it if you want from there. It's called:
GOING THROUGH THE MOTIONS
Her flame-red hair matched the fire in her belly. She entreated her husband to leave his work, and reluctantly he did, and came to her.
“I need you tonight”, she whispered, and began to undo his trousers. He wriggled out of the skin-tight pants by himself, and moved against her.
Staring into his eyes, she opened her dress, as red as her hair, and exposed her bosom. Then she picked up his hand, placing it between the pale mounds.
Hungrily, she sought his lips, but no return of passion was received.
“Alas, Feanor”, she sighed, “you no longer want me.”
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Date: 2005-08-16 02:14 pm (UTC)It's funny because I have always seen it as Nerdanel who lost her passion before Feanor. Of course, neither are canon, but this is how the story goes in my--admittedly strange--head.
I haven't worked on my sex drabble yet because said strange head is concocting a birthday story that's due on September the 2nd.... ::whistles innocently::
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Date: 2005-08-16 11:24 pm (UTC)I did read the drabble and... I know this is not what you would expect to say, but my first thougth as I was done with it was:
"Heh. Too busy working on the silmarils to pay heed to her?".
And the second thought:
"Well, at least the silmarils were something worth. Now they do the same just for the sake to watch the Soccer World Cup's match".
*sneer*
Sorry, couldn't resist it :P
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Date: 2005-08-17 01:48 am (UTC)::trying to behave::
"Heh. Too busy working on the silmarils to pay heed to her?"
Hehe! Great minds think alike! Jenni (
I must say that I love your icon. Your cranky-looking little Nelyo looks just like my Maitimo muse tends to look lately! :D
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Date: 2005-08-17 07:33 pm (UTC)And yep, isn't my icon lovely, Maedhros looking all grumpy and saying WTF? I am sure his brothers had something to do with his mood ;D
At least *three* or the brothers! ;D